Things to Consider

1. I believe that there are plenty of details for me to use when describing the place that my personal narrative is taking place. Although sparse in detail, there is still plenty for me to work with and at the very least make sure that my reader has a picture in there head of where it takes place.

2. The only way I really have of establishing myself as a reliable source is by showing the reader that I have a clear memory of the location and the events that took place there. Afterall, it is my little story.

3. I'm not sure if this will come into play during my narrative, since all of my memories take place in the same area.

4. The intended audience is anyone who has participated in a sport or in a group setting where they went through some hardships (here I'm referring to physical ones) and became stronger themselves but also became closer to those they were going through the difficulties with. The audiences age range imshoting for is 18-19, and the gender,race, etc. is irrelevant since this story is for everyone and applies to people with many different backgrounds.

5. I’m assuming that my readers are going to know what it’s like to spend many an hour in the same place in an attempt to better themselves physically and mentally. I will use this to tap into my readers own sense of nostalgia and fondness when looking back on their own experiences, so that they will relate with and become more invested in the story that I am telling.

Sid Haynes

Male

18, August 23, 1996

Atlanta, Ga

No siblings

Marie and Michael

Caucasian

2 Dogs

Was Graduating high school when I knew him

300

The X-Files

How to be a better wrestler

Chicken

Friday

Sleeping

Blue Powerade

Cannibal Corpse

*Explicit*

Soldier

Christian

Conservative

Was dating another one of the wrestler’s sister, Daniel Holcomb

Shorter but very good shape

Blue

Platinum Blonde, Swept over

Light complexion

Had the beginnings of cauliflower ear

T-shirt, often associated with a heavy metal group, boots and jeans

Very Muscular build

Grew up with his parents wanting him to be the best and being very protective, built up alot of frustration in hm which caused him to rebel and listen to death metal and not try in school. Was very devoted to wrestling tho.

Placing at the state championship for wrestling

During a tournament losing to a guy he should have easily beaten

Goal was to join the military after high school, special forces

Probably have dinner with me and some of the other guys on the team

Tough, Aloof, Callous